1. Perri

    Poor Drea! Very interested to see how their friendship develops as it feels like there’s a lot more there.

    One thing I spotted was this:

    Drea laughed. “Duh! Computers could care less about farewells.”

    Should “could” be changed to “couldn’t” to imply that they really don’t care, otherwise there’s a possibility that they potentially could?

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